Sabrina Sumsion

Thank you István Szabó, Ifj. for submitting a sample of Crystal Shade: Angeni!

 

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To everyone who lives to dream and dreams to live.

 

1 – CRYSTAL NIGHTFALL

 

“Thousands of stars could tell thousands of stories,” whispered the old man with a gentle smile. “I hope others also see the story of our beautiful star.”

Decades creased the countenance of the weary old man. He propped himself at the balcony, the silky wind ruffling his grey hair. His aged eyes never tired of the stars that pierced the infinite night sky. But despite the enchanting skyscape, his soul, which desired endless peace, was restless. He had one final promise he had made ages ago still unfulfilled; to share the past with those living in the present. A long held secret, a story to tell. Sorrow embraced him, as he knew as the sun rose to greet a new day one unheard story would pass along with him to vanish for eternity. And the time was close.

His sigh as soft as the night breeze, the old man pulled his robe tighter around him before he wandered away from the balcony. Slippered feet chafed against the cold stone floor as he shuffled to the middle of the large hall. Images of fighting angels and demons in the agony of their long forgotten war adorned the eleven immense columns surrounding a strange chrono device.

Thousands of energy orbs formed the mass of a majestic miniature galaxy under the tip of the long tapered crystal shard. Each star, a shiny orb, in this chrono device shone its story, its own truth in sapphire, orange, red, green, and purple orbs were just a few among countless colors without a known name. Clear and bright, the shard hovered untethered over the middle of this tiny world like some large mystical sundial.

The little galaxy gracefully turned between the stalwart columns. So peaceful and magnificent, its true purpose was hidden behind its enchanting mask. The shard’s polished surface mirrored the tired face of the old man who watched the device with endless respect. His eyes focused on the shadow of the sundial, which slowly crept around the crystal shard. The shadow didn’t come from the sun, which slept beyond the horizon as night stood silent sentry outside. It came from the shard itself. Even now, some of the orbs within the crystal’s untouchable dark shadow slowly changed color.

The old man closed his eyes. He was still in the hall, but his mind was far away in a forgotten world.

Majestic golden and silver colored eagle shaped crafts appeared in the bright blue sky to fly in formation under the brilliance of the sapphire sun; its eternal glow reflected from their metal bodies and sectioned wings. The crafts dove into battle against hideous dark flying creatures. Like dozens of sleek predatory birds, they fought against the evil web-winged serpentine enemies. Hunted down one by one, the metal bird craft were ripped to pieces and their wrecks left to explode in the hot white sands, where yet another battle raged.

Among the white dunes, brave winged warriors, evil demons, and humans in their shiny armor battled desperately with their crystal weapons to challenge death itself. The old man could still see the eyes of the fallen that knew they had no chance for survival, but were determined to die with courage for something in which they believed. Dignity filled their eyes, even in their last moments seeing the blade of death before it struck them down. But they never failed to bravely face their destiny.

This vision was banished by a bright flash, to be replaced by another. The old man stood in the middle of the crystal shard. Alone. Intense white light surrounded his body, young and healthy once more. An illusion of his blurred memory, he felt energy strings from the crystal tentatively run over his body and embraced him like a caring mother with her beloved child. He knew the energy strings would not harm him. His consciousness became one with the crystal. Alas, this was a long time ago, maybe in another life. Everything around him became a blur, and voices echoed in his mind as the crystal shard forced him to remember, to never forget.

A wise voice emerged with certainty. No one comes back from there alive, it declared.

That is my rightful place! shouted a distorted, chaotic voice. How dare you, puppet!

I’m sick of people dying because of you! This ends, not just for the next Crystal Shade! But forever! his own young voice echoed determined.

I will be with you. Always, whispered a kind female voice that flooded the old man with endless love, snapping him back to reality.

He sighed as he studied the crystal chrono device. One of the red orbs within the shard’s shadow suddenly changed to azure. The shadow of the crystal was forced away from that area. The old man’s fond smile returned.

“You never rest, old friend. You never rest,” his soft voice addressed the crystal. “Our destiny ties us together. We will meet again. Soon.”

The light flicker of soft footsteps was accompanied by a stifled chuckle behind one of the columns. The old man’s head bowed slowly as he curiously approached the column, but his memories rushed to remind him again of the forgotten past.

In his mind, he was young again and stepped between the shadowed columns of a marvelous dark temple. Sapphire sun streamed in stripes through the stone balcony and window casements. The chuckling of a young woman, different than he heard moments ago, caught his attention. A dark silhouette of a woman passed between two columns. His eyes tried to follow it, but the friendly shadows hid her as she reached the pillar. Silence.

His brown eyes mirrored the slick rune-covered columns before they noticed the shadows of the woman at the corner of a pillar. He moved ahead in silence to catch her from behind. They had played this age-old game forever. But as he reached the woman’s still, dark silhouette, it dissolved in his arms as he tried to hold her.

Outwitted again, the old man hung his head as he found himself again in reality, between the walls and columns of his little sanctuary. There was no hiding the loving smile that broke his heart anew. He did not want to remember. While most of his memories gave him happiness, some only caused pain. This was one of them.

The muffled chuckle of a child tickled his ears once again. It came from behind the closest column.

“I got you,” the old man crowed as he looked behind the stone pillar. But no one was there.

“No! We got you!” a little girl shouted victoriously from behind him.

The old man raised his hands and slowly turned around, his loving smile stretched into a grin that only a grandfather could achieve. “I give up.”

The little girl and boy who tricked him stood right in front of him, grinning in merry conquest.

“You may consider yourself the prisoner of the Knight of the Light,” the young boy proclaimed, his wooden sword pointed at the old man’s belly.

“Oh, I’m too old to be a prisoner, young knight,” responded the old man.

The boy and the girl looked at each other, and then the girl stepped forward and crossed her arms.

“On behalf of Princess of the Celestials—just to make that clear, that’s me...” She pointed at herself proudly, “You may redeem yourself, prisoner. For a prize.” Then she could not stop impishly grinning up at the old man as he played along.

Amused, the old man shook his head and smiled. He recognized the girl’s behavior, and her mischievous smile, too. The little one had learned, rather, inherited this behavior from someone who meant everything to the old man.

“And what would that prize be, little Princess?” he asked with a curious glance at the child.

“Tell us a story,” the boy added with a grin not unlike his sister’s.

“A story?”

“Yes. A story about brave knights and be-a-utiful princesses,” the girl added in graceful majesty while she gestured slowly. This gesture was also so familiar to the old man.

“And war, where valiant heroes are born,” the boy added.

“Can you tell a story about her?” the girl asked wistfully. The young boy nodded his agreement.

The old man sank deep into thought, and then nodded to the children.

“Come,” he invited them to the other end of the room and his chair, where he watched the chrono device day by day. The children followed in excited silence. But suddenly everything blurred and tilted around the old man. He tottered, but at the very last moment, he sat in his chair. The voices came to haunt him again.

Not willing to believe. No explanation is possible, the woman’s great disappointment echoed in his mind.

There is no mercy for weaklings! shouted a demented voice.

To reveal the truth, to understand what surrounds you, now, in the present, you must reveal the truth of the past, a wise male voice added.

When your journey ends, we will be together. Again, an angelic female tone whispered.

Slowly reality surrounded the old man as he heard the woman’s voice. “Soon,” he whispered. The children looked at him. He felt they were always a little afraid when he talked to the air.

“Are you alright?” asked the boy.

“My body is old and tired,” the old man said. He sat himself comfortably in his chair. “But my soul is younger and healthier than ever.”

Deep in thought, the old man smiled before he looked at the children.

“So, you’d like to hear a story about her?” he asked and the children nodded.

The old man let out a sigh tinged with fond memories. He never thought anyone would ask about the mysterious guardian angel that changed everything. Yet they did and they deserved to know who she really was.

The children sat down on the carpet at his feet and watched the old man’s youthful anticipation. He gathered his thoughts and smiled fondly at the children.

“Then I will give you a story that both of you want. A story about an era where light and darkness clashed at mythical legendary places, where valiant heroes lived and fought loved and died. But foremost it’s about the life of a lonely angel, who has challenged even death itself, so others may live. It’s the true story of the Crystal Shade; or as she called it in her beautiful, forgotten language, the Eecrys Denara.”

“The Crystal Shade? What is that?” asked the girl.

“As she always said, the crystal; one of the most beauteous elements in the universe. And all galaxies, others, and our own are just like a crystal. Beautiful, perfect, shiny, and faultless, whose brilliance whispers peace and eternal harmony, but even crystals have a shadow. A dark shade that hides the mistakes dulls the cruelty and the void.”

He looked at the crystal chrono device.

“The Crystal Shade is the story of beginnings and endings; the brilliance of life itself whose shadow is also able to make us all vanish if we live our lives blindly. Everything we do throughout our days, our history, we challenge its mighty power that determines what our future will be; as the present battle of the past conquest is always the key to determining the future. It can be everything we ever desired and it can be the greatest illusion of all. Whoever faced with it always needed to realize; nothing and no one was what they appeared to be within the Crystal Shade.”

The old man paused as forgotten memories flooded him again for a blink of an eye.

I don’t care about a world in a slow, purple prose fairy tale. I care only about the people, little one. Get to the point, his own young, impatient voice had declared.

You, human are so impatient, ignorant, and selfish. What is worse, you’re so proud of it, a disappointed angelic voice responded. You believe everything is just about people, yet you don’t know anything about the world that surrounding you.

“Everyone cares about people. But someone must care about the world itself,” whispered the old man and smiled at the irony; he just realized the once resisting young man had become the one who tended to the world the most. He knew the story was far more than the woman’s life. The young angel’s story was also about the world itself.

He looked beyond the children at the chrono device once again, focused on a tiny orb that swam amidst the thousands of others around the crystal; truth shone within every star, every planet. While he didn’t know the story and the truth of the rest, he knew the life of this little one, as this was the closest to his heart.

“Eecrys Aredia. A fragile, heavenly place so distant, yet so close, our known and also unknown world. Oh, you should've seen her home, that true paradise!” His old heart beat with excitement as he continued, “The old sapphire sun brought smiles, happiness and life, watching over and embracing every continent with her nurturing motherly light. The calm breeze whispered the ruling peace and equality, singing to everyone as it sighed among the leaves and branches of the rich lands. Crystal clean drops in rivers and vast oceans flowed peacefully, boundless and undisturbed just like life itself on our fragile home world. Nothing evil. No hate, grudge, wealth, poverty, misery, nor mastery. Just harmony. Oh, and the angelic vanguards of peace, our Guardians; the brave and noble Aserians have watched over, guarded and guided mankind for so long, since Eecrys Aredia existed.” His smile was kind as he looked at the swimming little orb, which seemed so peaceful, but it’s long history was always born in pain and suffering.

“But beneath the surface, Eecrys Aredia was a place of myth and buried secrets shadowed by the legend of the Crystal Shade. Many feared it would return one day to destroy the peace which ruled for so long, to erase everything the Aserians ever created. But no one knew how and why. Although no one ever turned against their fellow kind, and no human ever wielded a weapon, the Aserians were ready to fight for mankind if need be to keep their souls clean even in the darkest hours. Generation after generation the Guardians prepared and patiently waited for the dreaded Crystal Shade. But it never came.”

The old man paused as the night delusively gazed at him from outside.

Please, let me tell her story, he wished. There was so much to tell and his time was so very short.

“How are Guardians born? How was she born?” asked the girl.

“Oh, she wasn’t born as a Guardian. She was a human once.” The old man smiled warmly. “Grace Sessa Aredia, ‘the graceful bright guardian’; earning her name by being born when the sapphire sun, Sachylia was the brightest in the sky. A seemingly ordinary little girl who had dreams, the desire of knowledge that loved her family, sister, mom and dad. Just like you, little Princess,” he put a kindly hand on her head. “But in the fragile shell, her sleeping soul was ancient and forever, destined to seek an answer for an eternal question and fight for the sake of all creation when the time comes.”

Long forgotten voices, and images became vivid memories in his tired mind; voices he had never heard, but knew existed. Words thought by a fragile soul millennia ago, but only memories remained of them that he never experienced, but someone else did who had been born, lived, and fought in that forgotten era of the Crystal Shade.

“Dreams haunted her from her first breath that no one, not even the wisest of Aserians could decipher. Dreams that many times foretold her future became stranger and more mysterious as time passed. But they enlightened her path and slowly shepherded the mist aside to connect the beginning with the unavoidable end; as for her the end was just the beginning.”

 

* * *

 

Strange. I have wings, beautiful white guardian wings like I always wanted. But I hate flying. I don’t know why. Mother told me that Guardians are never afraid of anything. But I’m afraid of the height. I was never afraid of it before. Father and Mother always were proud of their little girls, because we’re brave. Because I’m brave. I love to fly in our silver eagle among the clouds, high above the mountains and vast grassy fields. Father promised that he would teach us how to fly our silver birdy. But now, I’m not in our Anshara. And my beloved parents and Aurora are not with me. But why? We’re always together. We help each other. That’s what a family does. Father and Mother never left me alone. But now they’re not here and I’m not a child. It is strange because I feel I am an adult.

My breath is so cold, but everything is so real. Am I still asleep? Am I dreaming all of this? I’m scared. I want to go home. And I will. But not now.

Now, I’m flying almost silent in the night. Somehow, I feel safe in this black diamond. It is embracing me. I’m drawn by the Sacred Crystal that lies on the dark horizon; its faultless brilliance is the beacon to us in the darkest night. It’s calling us.

Us. I’m not alone. I feel someone is with me. But the dreaded deep dark calls me. The endless depth, I fear it. I don’t want to think of it. I don’t want to fall. I want to see who is with me. I feel safe with him. But my soul forces my eyes closed to not see the depth. Strange.

“Grace,” a feminine voice wove its way into her mind.

I’m safe, but I hate flying.

“Grace Sessa Aredia,” whispered a woman’s voice into Grace’s tiny ear. “Wake up. Get out of your bed. The sun is already glowing brighter blue than the aura of a Sapphire Guardian. Wake up, my darling.”

“Is it morning already, mother?” Grace balked with closed eyes while she pulled her pillow over her sleepy face.

“And your breakfast is waiting for you,” her mother’s kindness continued. “What have you dreamt about this time, little one?” she asked.

Grace immediately pulled the pillow off her face and turned a hard look at her mother, who sat on the edge of her bed in a dark yellow saree, and watched her kindly.

“I’m not little. I’m already seven,” Grace retorted resentfully.

“Oh, I know, my princess,” smiled her mother while she stroked Grace’s blond hair. “So?”

“My dreams are my fantasies, mother,” said the defiant and secretive little girl. Her soul yearned to share her strange, vivid dream with her, but not now. Maybe later. Her mother smiled tenderly and shook her head in amusement.

In her blue saree, Grace looked around the large room. The sapphire sun, Sachylia had already left the horizon, its rays flowing into her room. The wooden bed on the other side of the room was empty.

“Is Aurora awake already?” she turned to her mother.

“She is not sleeping all the day away as you do sometimes.”

“I just...” She paused for a thoughtful moment, “Had some work to do last night.” Grace gestured and tried to seem mysterious and important, imitating her father. “After I worked so hard, I have every right to sleep as long as I can.”

“You always learn the worst things from your father, young lady.” Amused by her headstrong daughter, her mother shook her head.

“And I always have the right, Lady,” Grace added as she crossed her arms and raised her nose with pretended defiance.

“Like this one.” Her mother smiled warmly, but then she turned motherly serious. “You do know the Daharra come to snatch young ladies who do not sleep at night.”

“The shadow mingan is just a legend of the adults, mother,” Grace determined as her little heart dictated to her.

“Never forget, every legend has truth in its voice,” responded her mother in an icy tone. “The Daharra always know when you’re sleeping and when you’re awake. It is always watching, unseen from the darkness. And when the Daharra sees you’re not sleeping, its cold howling is a warning it’s coming to get you.”

Grace remembered the night when, under the protective cover of darkness of her blanket, she had worked to finish Aurora’s gift. She really had heard the howling of a mingan. Maybe the Daharra have warned her it will come and snatch her. She already wondered why the shadow mingan spared her. Her eyes peeked at the small light crystal near the bed, which gave her the tiny light under the blanket to protect her from darkness.

“A crystal’s brilliance mirrors its shadow; only sleep and sweet dreams can hide you from the shadow mingan, young lady,” her mother continued almost silently as she also looked at the light crystal.

Grace held her breath as silence settled. Her consciousness waited for the help of her protective inner voice, which always whispered what to do, even in the most desperate moments, like this one. Except now, even the voice that always guarded and guided her remained quiet.

The little girl looked at her mother worried; her sleepless eyes begged for motherly protection. She feared the creature will come for her tonight and as every light has its own shadow; shadow, which is the land of the dreaded Daharra, no one will be able to protect her.

“Usually there is no hope for a sleepless soul,” her mother just shook her head resignedly as she watched her daughter, then she took a soft sigh. “But I’m sure the Daharra has forgiven you, for now, because selfless, you were awake to make a gift to give happiness to your sister.” She leaned closer to her daughter to whisper into her tiny ear. “But to earn its full forgiveness, you’ll have to go sleep earlier tonight. You must promise.”

“I promise,” smiled Grace while hope mirrored in her eyes and embraced her mother. She felt her mother may be right and maybe, just maybe the creature wouldn’t snatch her as the sun goes down. Her mother’s seriousness was replaced by happiness and she gave relieved Grace’s cheek a kiss that for a change watched her savior with endless love.

“Come, Princess. Maybe we’ll wait for you before we go to the feast of Odess’iana. But if you do not hurry, Aurora is surely going to eat your breakfast too.”

“I give my portion to her,” Grace played her majestic princess role further. “She is my little Princess sister after all. What is mine is also hers.”

“Well now, her majesty is a giver and merciful as always.” Her mother bowed her head respectfully. “Princess Aurora is surely going to enjoy your gifts. Moonlight jam, Andrenian bread, apple cake, spicy frozen whipped cream with cocoa, and…”

“With the exception of this once, Lady Margey,” Grace interrupted quickly while she shoved her blanket off, and sprang out of the bed.

“Is there Ambrosia too, mother?” excited, she asked.

“The freshest Ambrosia that you ever drank, your majesty,” Lady Margey gestured kindly with her hands. “So, did you finish Aurora’s gift last night?”

Proud of herself, Grace nodded while she picked up her blue cotton slippers from the floor beside the bed, and then she pulled her mother to a large closed oak chest at the far end of the room excitedly. “I hope she likes it,” she whispered. With a slipper hanging from one small hand, she opened the chest.

“She surely will,” confirmed Lady Margey while Grace carefully took out two small, intricately carved wooden winged dolls beside a large old children’s book, Spirit Guardians Eriana and Iria.

With eyes that glistened like pearls, her mother looked at both dolls. Their bodies and faces exquisitely carved, they represented young female Aserians. The elder was wrapped in a sapphire silk saree, while the younger woman was similarly adorned in amber orange. Their hair was made of straw, but the young woman’s hair was stained dark red. Their large fluffy angel wings were made of white cotton.

“You, you’ve made the Spirit Guardians!” Lady Margey exclaimed.

“Yes. But I changed some details,” Grace hesitated just a little while she watched her mother. “Artist’s freedom,” she added proudly. “But I couldn’t figure out how to make their mighty crystal blades,” she continued with some guilt and disappointment. “I never saw one.”

In her eyes, the dolls seemed incomplete and so empty without their mighty weapon; the weapon that was capable of maintaining eleven shapes as needed to protect the innocents from the evil that the legendary dreaded era, the Crystal Shade carried within.

“Very few have laid eyes on an Eecrys Suria. If they ever saw it at all,” her mother encouraged her. “Maybe the crystal blades are just a tale, a legend of the Aserians.”

Her mother smiled as Grace nodded and offered her master works. “The blue one is me, the great princess, Eriana, and Aurora as the youngest Princess Iria.”

“They are beautiful. Aurora is surely going to like your gift. Even without the crystal blades,” amazed, she turned the dolls in her hands.

“Thank you, mother,” Grace said softly while she added this deep in her proud heart. “I really hope so.”

Margey kissed Grace’s cheek. “You’re the best sister that anyone could have,” and she meant it.

Grace nodded thanks and took the angel dolls back from her mother. She carefully laid them in the box right beside the book of their story. Then she stopped and watched them for a moment.

“Always remember. Their soul is the mirror of your soul, my little girl,” whispered her mother into her tiny ear.

None of you will ever be alone. I promise, thought Grace while she studied the illusionary happiness in the eyes of the dolls, the same happiness within her own soul. Here the Ice Born Soul can’t hurt any of you.

For a moment, she felt chilled by the name of the mysterious and legendary cursed soul that she had always feared. It was the only one capable of destroying the soul of her invincible legends. But she never understood how and why. Her brave Spirit Guardians always defeated evil so easily; at least as she always imagined their story. But the Ice Born Soul was so different and untouchable.

As the top of the box hid the dolls and the little lock clicked, Grace knew she did this to keep her legends safe from the dreaded soulless soul; whatever it truly was.

“So, where is my breakfast?” Grace’s brown eyes glimmered happily as she turned to her mother with a grin.

 

* * *

 

Sweet cold wind hit Grace’s face as she stepped out into the large hanging garden. Calm tinkling of a wind crystal chime greeted her. Beautiful vines twisted around the tall columns and flowers that were her mother’s pride, hung like bright colourful ribbons from the walls. The old green oaks and the multitude of other trees throughout their large land slowly dressed in brown, yellow and orange while they dropped their leaves. Luscious aroma of flowers and crops tickled her nose; flowers that hung along the walls already prepared for the long cold nights of the approaching snowy first season, Slumberous. The second trimester, Prosperous was long gone along with the colourful life outside the garden, but Grace didn’t miss the warmest season at all as it was also the rainiest trimester; the time when her home world shared the life giving water with the plants. As she looked at the distant golden grass field as she did every morning, she missed the wild tasunkes who thundered there, the yellow apoideas, and other flying insects that dusted the flowers to create their delicious aya nectar. The field was so empty without them. Even without their presence, the entire valley of Seradelphia was still so beautiful.

Behind the field, the vinyards of the colourful vinifera grapes covered the whole side of the hill behind the glamorous sprawling house to show the last season of the three trimesters. Deciduous ruled. The harvest season, the time of great harvest feasts, and what was most important to her, it was the season of her birth.

The sapphire light shone right into her eyes and stroked her skin. Grace raised her hand to touch the untouchable distant sun, but she focused on her hand, which was surrounded by the gentle blue glow. An imaginary illusion of the little girl as if her being were embraced by a sapphire aura, the aura that embraced every living being invisible and unseen and told the nature of every single being to those, mostly celestial beings, who had the talent to feel and know everything by a gentle touch.

“Your new day welcomes you Eecrys Aredia,” quoted her fairy tale heroine, Eriana; the brave Spirit Guardian whose words made her heroine a real guardian when she determined to save her home world from evil. “You’ll shine in the light for eternity. Don’t fear, I…” She stopped to smile as the illusion of light danced around her hand. For a moment, she felt endless power in herself like she would be a true Guardian of her home world, just as Eriana. “I will protect you. I promise.”

*End of Sample*

Crystal Shade: Angeni ©2011 All Rights Reserved

 

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